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Finally, finally, finally done!

Yes, I am super excited to say that I have completed the final revision of my current MS. I am exhausted, mentally and physically but it is done!

This was very much a rewrite as opposed to revision. In total, I would say I applied four revisions and this complete rewrite to the book, and oddly enough the word count didn't really move that much. Maybe 2,000 words.

So now, it is out with readers and hopefully soon I can begin the grueling query process. Wish me luck! :)

M.B.

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  1. Karen StrongAugust 16, 2010 at 12:42 PM

    Awesome Melissa!

    That is a GREAT accomplishment. You should be so proud of yourself.

    Good luck on the querying process.

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  2. M.B. WestAugust 16, 2010 at 1:36 PM

    Thanks Karen! It's felt like a very long road, but I am so glad to be at this point. :)

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  3. LauraAugust 16, 2010 at 3:15 PM

    :-D ... so exciting!!! The best is yet to come!

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  4. madameduckAugust 16, 2010 at 4:05 PM

    Good luck!! Congratulations on finishing. That is HUGE! :)

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  5. M.B. WestAugust 16, 2010 at 4:21 PM

    Laura - thanks! And hopefully when you read it you'll enjoy the changes. Can't wait to read more of LC!

    MD - It feels huge, though I guess that is silly. :) I am not naive though, I know what lies in store and how long the journey can be, but I am so determined to see this thing in print!

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  6. MeadowAugust 16, 2010 at 5:33 PM

    Congratulations!! Sounds like a lot of hard work but you sound very happy with yourself, so I say it's worth it! I'll bet it's wonderful!

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  7. M.B. WestAugust 16, 2010 at 11:15 PM

    Thanks Meadow! It was a lot of work, but I'm one of those that thinks nothing worth having is easy. :)

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  8. Anne M LeoneAugust 17, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    Congrats! I hope you're celebrating!

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