tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4565649801044338375.post984941327632676768..comments2023-03-18T11:07:10.207-04:00Comments on Melissa West: Thesaurus Talk: RaceMelissa Westhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02966291275720561057noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4565649801044338375.post-73225429797188702682011-05-09T12:30:28.763-04:002011-05-09T12:30:28.763-04:00Just wandered over from the QT forum, and I love t...Just wandered over from the QT forum, and I love this blog background! I'm not quite sure which words I overuse, but I definitely overuse hand motions during dialogue. Characters constantly pick at loose threads on their clothes, knead their hands together, wipe hair from their faces, and tap things while they talk. It's a little ridiculous. ;)LisaAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02084670148565013397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4565649801044338375.post-55530238909711128312011-04-30T14:22:26.767-04:002011-04-30T14:22:26.767-04:00Overused verbs? Definitely "turned" and ...Overused verbs? Definitely "turned" and "looked." Yikes, boring!Kenda Turnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12972218446945404475noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4565649801044338375.post-31078667517444040012011-04-30T05:26:20.991-04:002011-04-30T05:26:20.991-04:00I like rustle and whisk especially :)I like rustle and whisk especially :)annahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03284369551966958873noreply@blogger.com